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Writing prompt # 1

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A Writing Prompt test: # 1

Prompt: Love me..

Remi love for a close friend begins to grow.

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You were my first friend.

My first REAL friend I'd ever had in years.

I never believed in friends, figured there were just a wast and time consuming.  People who you just talked too, cheering you when feeling down about something. First time we meant..I wanted to push you down the stairs. You were nothing but another annoying, loud, pain-in-my-ass classmate that wouldn't shut up. And I told you my feelings towards you.

That was my first fight. And I loss. Or was it a tie? Whatever it doesn't matter.

The point is, if I had just ignored you that day we never would had become friends. We'd never have the chance to hangout. You had never become my best friend. I wouldn't be there to help you whenever you'd do something stupid, like the idiot you are, and..You would never had been my first lover.my first love.

I'm crazy about you.

I'm too scared to tell you because I fear you'd shut me out. Call me some sort of freak and run off.

I'm scared. I just want to need to tell you, scream it to the world and collapse from exhaustion and lack of air. Hell I'll ever carve it into the moon if possible.

I love you. Duke, I love you. I want you. I need you. Please..please! I'm tired of being alone! I want somebody to love! Please, I would fight it anymore! Just give me a answer..tell you love me..tell me..

just once. Then..I can die happy
This is just something I want to do to improve my writing.

Make up a prompt (like the one I did) and write something that connects to the prompt

Duke and Remi are two characters I'm using for this.

There mines!
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loveisgrim's avatar
This was painful

I a good why. You got the characters emotion across very nicely this was cool.